student work about pictures below

The assignment was to write in the present tense about the first four pictures and in the past tense about the final two pictures. I know the appropriateness of the pictures is questionable.
But here is some student writing after one edit.
Dilafruz- "A gentleman walks behind the beautiful girl. She walks with pleasure as the weather is fine and the sun shines. She puts on a wonderful dress. Suddenly the man falls into a man hole. The girl cries and calls to the ambulance. The ambulance comes and takes the man to the hospital. He hurts a lot and is unconscious. Doctors examine him and operate, so they put him in the hospital for a month.
The man went out from the hospital. His hand was bandaged, but with the other hand he smoked. At the same time he complimented another woman. Then he fell down to the man hole again, as his mind thought only about woman and that's why he couldn't see anything in the road."
Nasiba- "I want to describe this pictures. We can see a man, who walks behind the beautiful woman. He tries to compliments to her. The man smokes the cigarette. The man falls on this man hole. The woman calls to ambulance. The ambulance takes the man away to the hospital. In the hospital doctors operates him. He breaks some part of his body.
The man went out from the hospital. His hand was bandaged. He was smoking with his other hand. He was well dressed. Next to him walked a beautiful woman, who was maked up. The man followed behind the woman again. He didn't complimented her, and didn't saw the man hole. He felt down to the man hole again. The man was stupid that's why he felt down again."
Manizha- "A man walks behind a woman in the street. The man compliments to the woman. He smokes a cigarette. Suddenly the man falls into a man hole. Then, the woman cries and calls to the ambulance. The nurse takes him to the hospital and the man is unconscious. The man is in the bed and surgery doctor checks him. One of them is shock. To my mind the man's condition is very serious.
The man's hand was broke. He came out of the hospital. His hand was bandaged. He was walking behind another woman. He complimented her again. The woman looked very beautiful. In the street were many people. He didn't notice the way. And he fell into a man hole again."